Because I could not rise for Sun,
it did kindly rise for me.
Does the Sun make you shiver?
does it?
How happy is the dazzling sunlight!
Does the sunlight make you shiver?
does it?
Pay attention to the sunburn,
the sunburn is the most bronzed burn of all.
Are you upset by how brunette it is?
Does it tear you apart to see the sunburn so tanned?
The fat sunblock sings like a panacea
Never forget the double-chinned and pyknic sunblock.
Sun’ is a topic far too neglected in modern poetry. I’m so glad you chose to tackle it.
Thank you so much 🙂
I will never forget tanned and brunette sunburn thanks to the vivid imagery created by you.
Thank you so much 🙂
Cool poem:)
Thank you so much 🙂
Great poem. I like it.❤️ And thank you for your request, 🙏 I will confirm absolutely, just something doesn’t work with it in my site. 😊
Thank you so much 🙂
It was a great surprise for me. I like it. And, at last, I succeeded to confirm your request, thank you. Just the messages I cannot read yet. It was a huge struggle…
Wonderfully done, Susan! It is very emotional and meaningful made me feel very sensational.
Thank you 🙂